Labels: random tots..daily life..comments..memories..
firstly..zr asked mi to comment on her personal statement for med application so here is it:
sorry darl..cos im lazy to type a long long msg on my phone..so typing is better..(:
i tink its act quite well done..balanced..but i rem u saying tat ur teacher asked u to focus on wat u haf tat others dun haf tat makes u a better choice..or wat are the special qualities u haf tat make u a suitable canditate as a med student..hmm..dun reali see alot of tat though..
but the essay clearly describes wat made u wan med..which i tink is good n impo..
abt 3/4 of your essay focuses on ur personal experience..the dental assistant..ur grandfather n the cip..im not sure whether its good to haf a large part on personal experiences..if its helps..then leave it there..but if it doesnt..i tink mayb u can cut short abit..and include other impo parts which u may wan to state besides personal experiences..
the language is good..but if u seriously wan to improve on it to the max..mayb tink of better words which can convey better to the reader ur msg..but take note..cos personally..i tink too mani 'hard words' may cause the reader to lose interest after awhile..so take note..but i tink its quite fine now..
hmm..tats abt it..but honestly..i cant spot grammer mistakes..though some sentences are abit too long..haha..steven's el is better than mi..he can correct U..while i cant reali do so..haha..but yups..take note of any possible grammer errors etc..
tats abt it..hope u can work on it abit more to polish everything..n submit it soon..best wishes..=)
parents of my sec3 students reflected tat my students cant understand wat im saying..when i heard tat..i was reali sad..cos i reali spent alot of effort..or maybe all my effort into teaching them..i tot of the best ways to let them understand concepts..repeated n repeated..without losing my patience..for every point..i repeated at least 3 times..sometimes i even tried various ways to convey an impo point..and now ur telling mi it din work at all..
no one can vouch for mi the pains i went thru to teach well..maybe the students..but in e end..its my conscience who can oni show tat yes..i did my best..act i can jus be a slack teacher..gif them freedom..dun spend any time printing notes for them..dun gif them work so tat i no nid to go thru or mark..but in the end..i still do my best gifing them the best i can gif..but it seems lyk theres no reward back..im angry..n sad..cos its not worth it reali..the pay is reali low..lyk less than half i can get if i try..wats keeping mi or holding mi back are oni the students..cos i wan to help them to do well..but it seems tat i dun get wat i truly deserve..
its seriously not easy to talk n project ur voice for 4.5h straight..y am i sacrificing my precious weekends to teach..spending my time to read thru n prepare stuff..the first time i started teaching 3 classes straight..i had a bad headache..the second time last week i had a bad sorethroat..but i hang on..i continued till e end..but it seems lyk all the efforts are not appreciated..
it oni tells tat its not worth it putting in everything..cos in the end..u jus dun get it back..i so so feel lyk gifing up..i tink im gifing up the sec3 class..and if i reali feel too tireds..im going to gif all my classes up..
i so so wan to vent my anger reali..i so so wan to be evil..to be nasty..to be bad..to sae all those sarcastic things..but..i noe its veri bad of mi to do so..so i'll control..
but i guess in the end..sadness overwhelms the anger..i dun noe y tis is affecting mi quite abit..but dun worry..im fine..dun nid any counselling..haha..tis is jus a setback..the oni thing tat i can rely on is yups..my conscience..i haf done my best..
but mayb from todae onwards..either i quit..or i'll no longer put in all my efforts into the sec3 class..sorry..they dun deserve it..im no longer going to waste my efforts..
but the thing tat irks mi is reali my boss..or bosses..i reali feel tat they open the tuition centre not to help those children..but to earn money..i cant see them trying their best..i mean..of cos everyone wans to earn money..but shdnt be wanting to help them be one of the most impo motives..
i tink i'll still continue the sec4 class..if i can take it..i may gif up one dae..maybe not so soon..( i tink im reali weak..tis is a bad point) cos..i reali nid some free time..a break..a rest..
all tis jus saes..sometimes..we cant be too nice..we cant tink of oni others too much..(others who are not worth it)..maybe..we shd tink more for ourselves..
enough of unhappy stuff..here is the happier part..
went out wif hl to vivo for dinner..it has been so long since we last met..lyk one month..suddenly..she seems so unfamiliar..as in physically..cos she has been someone im so used to seeing everydae..but now..we rarely meet..haha..but of cos..the chemistry btw us jus nv disappears..haha..
n..a stranger ( her vcd shop customer) gaf her flowers!! haha..tis is surprising rites..cos rarely does a random stranger gif flowers to a stranger..sigh..her attractiveness is increasing intensely..sigh..guess i muz work on mine soon..bleahs..haha..a sweet but kind of funnie n odd experience..but kip tat attractivness level dear..haha..(:
went out wif apple to orchard..it has been one month since i last went to orchard! tis shows how little time i haf..though i shop randomly..lyk after work..but tats not called shopping..cos i jus buy wat i lyk within mins when i tink its nice..suddenly the clothes in the shops in far east seem so unfamiliar..apple bought mani things..haha..realised out tastes are act quite similar..but yet quite different..but we haf similar items..haha..lyk shoes..(=
saw a bag i reali lyked..but i din buy it..cos its brown..and i alreadi haf a brown bag..lyked it alot alot..kind of regret not buying..but its okay..i'll find one which is even better..lyk wat apple saes..haha..
i tink i nid a new bag..and a new pair of flat shoes..cos mine..tat one which is white..n i lyked it alot alot..is spoilt..the bottom part came off when i was caught in a heavy rain..=( i'll go for more retail therapy..when im more free..when tis contract ends..now im tinking..shd i start finding a new job soon..or take a small break..but im afraid i'll be bored at home..haha..
enjoyed the dae wif apple reali..though it was oni 5h..we would haf continued if not for my dance classs..but it was so fun..n i lyk the dumpling noodle we ate..haha..thank you apple..cos i reali enjoyed myself..it has been so long..since i last had fun..can we go out more? haha..another trip some time soon k..and a nice yummy dinner..which u promised..haha..(:
n gal..be confident k..dun alwaes tink tat tis is too aa for mi..tis doesnt suit mi..cos..you create ur own style..dun be afraid of wat others tink..dress in wat u lyk..wat u tink is nice..wat u feel comfortable in..cos a confident gal = a pretty gal..dun alwaes sae apple is ugly..cos..u noe ur not..and everyone noes ur not..rites..(:
although im seriously someone who lacks confidence too..but..its true tat confidence gifs u the extra attractiveness..gals shd luv ourselves..dote on ourselves..n pamper ourselves wif more retail therapy isnt it..haha..so whens the next shopping trip? (;
tats abt all..almost 12 soon..one h plus to lunch..i miss desserts..lyk ice kacang n ice-cream..cos apple discouraged mi from eating desserts yest..=( haha..shall indulge in some when im free..(: i luv sweet sweet desserts!
love.
---8:45 AM---
